Hi Nicole!
I thought you did an excellent job on your lesson plan, which shows that you put the time and effort into completing it. It was easy to follow, and you added many details that make it easy for anyone reading it to understand or even replicate each section of your lesson. I also can relate to your experience with the HP5 activities, initially, I found it super confusing to create the drag-and-drop activity. However, after watching a YouTube tutorial on how to create the activity, I was able to create it effectively. I thought your decision to create a drag-and-drop activity was an excellent idea, especially to learn the different parts of an apple, which relates to your lesson objectives. Overall, great job!